Jan 30, 2022 8:08 AM
LeeeB
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hnngh
Aww.....
INeverReadTheTOS
I liked this.
bloodyyanks
And everybody clapped.
Callbox
Super awkwardly written, clunky and strange. The author's goal was just to assign genders and sexual orientation rather than tell a story.
GravyEducation
Thank God I'm not the only one who thought this was cringey
TheSilverSeraph
You know, I think it was fine until the baker gender reveal. That just seemed forced
YouWillNeverFindMe
I liked the start, I got lost along the way though. I'm also drunk... Yeah, going to bed now, it is time, this is the way.
PressMyButtonsBaby
lesteros
Im sober.. they are mixing up the pronouns so much some scenes make no fucking sense
h4p10
They didn't mix the pronouns up at all.
sniggly5212
It was a broken premise based on either a misunderstood story or an intentionally misrepresented one. Eh, at least it's not a tiktok.
hnngh
Aww.....
INeverReadTheTOS
I liked this.
bloodyyanks
And everybody clapped.
Callbox
Super awkwardly written, clunky and strange. The author's goal was just to assign genders and sexual orientation rather than tell a story.
GravyEducation
Thank God I'm not the only one who thought this was cringey
TheSilverSeraph
You know, I think it was fine until the baker gender reveal. That just seemed forced
YouWillNeverFindMe
I liked the start, I got lost along the way though. I'm also drunk... Yeah, going to bed now, it is time, this is the way.
PressMyButtonsBaby
lesteros
Im sober.. they are mixing up the pronouns so much some scenes make no fucking sense
h4p10
They didn't mix the pronouns up at all.
sniggly5212
It was a broken premise based on either a misunderstood story or an intentionally misrepresented one. Eh, at least it's not a tiktok.